This deviation has been labeled as containing themes not suitable for all deviants.
Log in to view

Deviation Actions

StrangeJack's avatar
By
Published:
9K Views

Literature Text

This content is unavailable.
So, did something a little bit different. Usually the only writing I do is for the "Sentry of Pricom", but I had an idea for a story that I really wanted to put to paper.

This overall story was inspired by this picture I found on Twitter of a "mail delivery themed" photo shoot: sta.sh/0pnykmvbpqv

Sorry it's a bit lengthy, hopefully this won't deter too many people from reading. As usual, all critique is welcome.

UPDATE: Felt the need to read this again, and well, found a lot I didn't like. So I spent a good 3 hours working on edits. Namely just changing the writing at certain parts that killed the flow, along with a few additions and redundancy removals. Hope you enjoy.
Mature
© 2016 - 2024 StrangeJack
Comments29
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
ripx187's avatar

Great story! Loved the parts where the hero is exploring the girl's body, beautiful work! Thanks for sharing it.